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You are beautiful,
Golden and exotic
And I like you that way.
But you're so bad for me.

You've always been so sweet,
Always telling me that I could
Take as much of you as I want,
All the while killing me slowly.

But your kiss is delicious,
And my mouth screams more.
I oblige.
You taste better than I remember.

But you're going to hurt me
If I keep this up.

Don't get me wrong,
I tried to take the good with the bad at first.
But I started again,
Taking all of you, and relishing the flavor.

I've missed you but I didn't know it.
I forgot how good your taste was,
The salty and the sweet all in one.
I forgot what I was missing out on.

So, maybe I'll fall again sometime soon.
But for right now...
I think I'll have one more bite.
After all, Cake is delicious!

The awkward moment when I actually wrote this while eating Ramen Noodles...

But hey, I wouldn't cheat on Cake! Honest! (But Ice Cream is so good, too...)
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TiaTitan Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Up until the line about salty and sweet, I thought this was about cake. I'm glad you went to the cake in the end, it made me feel better about having a cake addiction, too. It's better for you than Ramen Noodles, so there's nothing wrong with having more :D
SwordSamurai Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
Haha, it actually IS about cake, but Ramen Noodles are legitimately the only food I will eat to feel better when I'm having a crappy day. And I put 'salty' and sweet because my favorite cakes actually taste sorta salty. But that's okay. ;) And yup, Cake is DELICIOUS! (I like it better than Ramen, but Ramen takes the cake, no pun intended, when I'm in need of deliciousness that actually counts for a meal.)
TiaTitan Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh oops, haha I thought you were talking about Ramen Noodles and then cake. Ramen Noodles are yummy though...they're not exactly healthy, haha but they are good
Sarvstergal Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is brilliant. I like it. (And I like cake too..)
SwordSamurai Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
Haha, well, cake is amazing. :)
Morcante Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I read this.

then I made my sister and mother read this.

We sympathize with you wholeheartedly. xD
SwordSamurai Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
xD I'm glad you like it. And I'm glad your mother and sister did, too.

After all, cake has no comparison. ;)
High-Low Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Student General Artist
This is brilliant, you sir (or madame) are amazing <3
SwordSamurai Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
Well, glad you like it. ;)
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