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You are beautiful,
Golden and exotic
And I like you that way.
But you're so bad for me.

You've always been so sweet,
Always telling me that I could
Take as much of you as I want,
All the while killing me slowly.

But your kiss is delicious,
And my mouth screams more.
I oblige.
You taste better than I remember.

But you're going to hurt me
If I keep this up.

Don't get me wrong,
I tried to take the good with the bad at first.
But I started again,
Taking all of you, and relishing the flavor.

I've missed you but I didn't know it.
I forgot how good your taste was,
The salty and the sweet all in one.
I forgot what I was missing out on.

So, maybe I'll fall again sometime soon.
But for right now...
I think I'll have one more bite.
After all, Cake is delicious!
...

The awkward moment when I actually wrote this while eating Ramen Noodles...

But hey, I wouldn't cheat on Cake! Honest! (But Ice Cream is so good, too...)
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TiaTitan Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Up until the line about salty and sweet, I thought this was about cake. I'm glad you went to the cake in the end, it made me feel better about having a cake addiction, too. It's better for you than Ramen Noodles, so there's nothing wrong with having more :D
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SwordSamurai Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
Haha, it actually IS about cake, but Ramen Noodles are legitimately the only food I will eat to feel better when I'm having a crappy day. And I put 'salty' and sweet because my favorite cakes actually taste sorta salty. But that's okay. ;) And yup, Cake is DELICIOUS! (I like it better than Ramen, but Ramen takes the cake, no pun intended, when I'm in need of deliciousness that actually counts for a meal.)
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TiaTitan Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh oops, haha I thought you were talking about Ramen Noodles and then cake. Ramen Noodles are yummy though...they're not exactly healthy, haha but they are good
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Sarvstergal Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is brilliant. I like it. (And I like cake too..)
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SwordSamurai Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
Haha, well, cake is amazing. :)
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Morcante Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I read this.

then I made my sister and mother read this.

We sympathize with you wholeheartedly. xD
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SwordSamurai Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
xD I'm glad you like it. And I'm glad your mother and sister did, too.

After all, cake has no comparison. ;)
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High-Low Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Student General Artist
This is brilliant, you sir (or madame) are amazing <3
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SwordSamurai Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
Well, glad you like it. ;)
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